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Title: Opferungsfic
author: hana_cho
Pairings: YunJae, YooSu ...
Chapters: 13/...
Rating:  NC-17
Warnings: AU, mpreg
Genre: Drama, Romance
beta-reader: [profile] junsu_luvr 


A/N: The title is German and means sacrifice plus the word fic of fanfic
Every time I talk about that story I call it Opferungsfic and because I can't find a name I didn't change it. ^^

Summary: Sacrificing is the keyword. Every three month is a changing of the turn in the village, which must give a offering to their lord. This time it is the village of the Kim brothers turn. To help his beloved younger brother Jaejoong sacrifices himself. But he never expected what would happen.



characters  , 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11, 12


Chapter 13

Weeks went by, after Junsu explained to Jaejoong that he could feel pleasure by doing it with the Lord too. He still had to go to Yunho's room every night, but to his luck and Yoochun's demand or request, he didn't get to feel the pain all those nights, nevertheless he still had to pleasure the Lord; giving him a blow job or hand job. As the weeks went by Jaejoong's 18th birthday went by, too. The Lord didn't pay much attention when Junsu wished his dear brother 'Happy Birthday'. He was continuing his daily routine; taking Jaejoong to his throne and letting him sit in front of his feet dressed in a hanbok, as he talked with the people of his property. More days went by and everyone in the mansion was preparing for the feast for the Lord's birthday in early February.

Finally the day came and Jaejoong woke up early that morning. The young man was too excited too sleep any longer. He knew that he had to attend the party, but wasn't allowed to speak one word, because no one knew and should know that he was male, that was what Yunho said to him last night. The black haired man stood up and went into the bathroom to take a long bath and get ready. As he was looking into the mirror while he was combing his hair after the bath he was thinking about the talk he had with Hankyung yesterday. The older one advised him to be a good boy and do what the Lord wanted, as a gift for him. On the other hand Jaejoong was thinking about another present. “Maybe I should try out to be more willing tonight and go after Junsu's explanation. "Maybe he would be happy if I don't lie down like a log all the time and be more active. He isn't in any way gentle but it doesn't hurt that much anymore. It could be that I'm used to it.”
He was looking at himself in the mirror and was satisfied with what he saw. His black hair was silky and reached his shoulders, his face was pale but it looked beautiful and his rosy lips were full like always. He wore a hanbok that looked like the one he wore when he came here, but this one was made from another material. The red upper part was only a bit darker and the green bottom part had more decorations but the most important thing was that he had chosen it by himself.

Jaejoong hoped he would meet Yunho's approval. He hoped so. He wanted to be beautiful only for him. Maybe he would see him with other eyes, maybe he would treat him better or would be nicer. All this was what Jaejoong wanted since he had gotten to know how the Lord really was. Since he knew that the older one was after all a nice caring person. A person that was loved by the people of his property, because he worried with them and tried everything to help them. Jaejoong was remembering the day on which the Lord changed his view of the world. It was a cold day in the middle of January when a woman came into the mansion with a young child not older than five years in her arms and was asking Yunho for an advise. Her husband died due to the harsh winter and she can't survive on her own. He listened to the woman's story the whole time and while thinking about a solution, the young child was sitting on his lap and he played with him.  It was such a heartbreaking picture. At that moment he knew Yunho wasn't like he was all the time to him.

The young man looked one more time into the mirror and saw himself with sad eyes. The thoughts about a nice, gentle Yunho hurt him. He wanted to feel the same kindness for himself.
As he heard a knock on the door he shook his head to get rid of the sorrowful thoughts. He left the bathroom and saw Hankyung enter his room.
“Oh you are already awake. Why are you up so early?” The servant asked him as a greeting.
“I couldn't sleep anymore. That's why I got ready
already. How do I look? Is it okay?” He asked the older one in reply. The young man wasn't sure about his appearance. He knew that he looked  beautiful, but maybe it was too much.
“Jaejoong, you look great even more prettier than when you came here.” Hankyung complimented the black haired man.
“Do you think he will like it?” Jaejoong was concerned about what the Lord would say to his look.
“You think too much about what he likes or wants. I shouldn't say that, but he treats you really bad and you still want to do everything that he wants without complaining. Don't you see that he won't change his attitude relating to you? Why are you doing all these things? You should be happy, the three months are almost over and you will be free again.” Hankyung was worried about Jaejoong's behavior latly. The younger one wasn't complaining rather he was eager to learn things to pleasure the Lord to make him feel good. 
“Haven't you said I shouldn't complain or even question him? I only do what you told me. I want to live in peace and I can only do it if I do what he wants. I don't want to get punished again.” He whispered the last words. It hurt him more when Yunho let out his anger on him. He didn't even have to be the cause, but Jaejoong tried everything to make it not even worse. The humiliation hurt him, it was breaking him. He was lying to the older one. He didn't do it because he was told, he wanted to do it. He wanted Yunho to be nicer due to the hard work and change Jaejoong had undergone.
“Is everything alright? Are you feeling okay?” The servant was worried about the other one.
“I'm fine, thanks hyung for your concern.” He lied again. He wasn't feeling fine. His body was fine, but his emotions, his feelings weren't alright. He hadn't told anyone about his feelings concerning the Lord. He wanted to tell Junsu what he was feeling, but his brother wouldn't understand him, no one would understand him. How could Junsu? Yunho treats him inferior to himself.
“Come on, I'll bring you to the breakfast.” Hankyung held out a hand to Jaejoong, but he only shook his head no.
“I'm not hungry. I'll wait here till the feast begins.” He declined the offer.
“You know the feast won't start before the late afternoon.”
“Could you please go? I'm feeling tired suddenly and want to sleep a bit.” The older man looked confused at him, nevertheless he turned around and left the room.
Jaejoong went to the window and sat down on the windowsill. He let out a sigh. He hated to lie. He hated to hide his real self.


The time flew by as he was sitting there and pitying himself and dreaming of a life he wanted so much, but couldn't have.
A knock on the door interrupted Jaejoong. He moved his head lazily into the direction of the door.
“Please hyung, I want my peace. Stop bothering me!” He shouted at the closed door. It was the nth time that the servant knocked on the door and asked him to join lunch or if everything was alright. Jaejoong turned back to the window and watched the beautiful scenery.
The door was opened quietly. The black haired man didn't recognize that someone had entered the room until he heard steps coming nearer to him.
“Hankyung, would you please leave?” The young man shouted but didn't bother to look at the person. He heard a light chuckle that made him to turn around slowly and when he saw who was in his room he jumped back.
“Did I scare you?” The other man laughed slightly again.
“My Lord, I'm sorry. I thought you were someone else.” Jaejoong answered slowly.
“I see, I see. Come on you won't want to miss my party.” Yunho said and turned around, while he offered one arm for the younger man. Jaejoong stood up and went to the Lord. He took the offer and let Yunho lead him out of the room. It was a rare opportunity that he offered him something and Jaejoong was really glad that today was a special day.   


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well yeah it is a bit short, sorry  ^.^

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Date: 2009-04-10 05:50 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] haru_ran
spot~~~

I read it again .... but first I need to let Jae come ;D

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Date: 2009-04-10 06:36 pm (UTC)
haru_ran: (jae - huh)
From: [personal profile] haru_ran
so now that Jae is finally sleeping, I can comment on your chap xDD

I still find the end really cute >//////<
I know Yunho is an asshole but still the end is cute =3

*kekekekeke* can't wait to read the more active Jae *_____*
it's so cute how Jae is feeling anxious about his looks for Yunho >//<
he has really fallen for him~~~~~
*listens to dolphin screams of Junsu due to the O-DVD*

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Date: 2009-04-10 05:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] chameron-xx.livejournal.com
RAWR chrissie bb got my spot nehh ><

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Date: 2009-04-10 06:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hana-cho.livejournal.com
well i was talking with her as I posted it and she was reading it through ^^

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Date: 2009-04-10 07:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jaeho-forever.livejournal.com
ahhh...it's the exciting part and you stopped here.....aish..
hee..hee..nevertheless, cant wait to see what has in stored for jaejoong and will yunho really fall and treat jaejoong like a lover??
cant wait for your next update..^^

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Date: 2009-04-10 07:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hana-cho.livejournal.com
well all that will you see in the next chapter *lol*

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Date: 2009-04-10 08:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ko-bands.livejournal.com
YAY! That was cute, and Jae is falling for Yun. I'm a new reader here, but I really like it!

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Date: 2009-04-10 08:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hana-cho.livejournal.com
oh thanks dear ^^
yeah jae is falling for Yunho

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Date: 2009-04-10 09:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] freya-xiah.livejournal.com
kya...
the ending is cute...
but will yunho treat jae better ???

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Date: 2009-04-10 09:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hana-cho.livejournal.com
you will see it soon

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Date: 2009-04-10 11:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] vlpdnsu68.livejournal.com
yaaaaaaaaaay yunnie mite b nicer today :D luv this!!! :] cant wait for more

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Date: 2009-04-11 04:17 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ms-ravishing.livejournal.com
well it's TOO short... T^T

but, it's clear that Jaejoong likes yunho now... (he even wahts to give special coughservicecough) when is yunho's turn to like jae??

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Date: 2009-04-11 05:50 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hana-cho.livejournal.com
i'm sorry that it is too short. I wasn't in the mod for more. And I haven't that much time to write anymore because my classes has started.

yeah Jae likes Yunho. Yunho's turn? You will see soon. ^^

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Date: 2009-04-11 04:42 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jaehos-luv.livejournal.com
aww...yunho is starting to become sweet to jaejoong, but why did u have to stop on that part? T^T U love to leave us in a cliffie^-^

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Date: 2009-04-11 05:52 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hana-cho.livejournal.com
*LOL* yeah I love cliffies, but I didn't thought that that was one. I thought more that it was a nice ending ^^

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Date: 2009-04-11 05:53 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] anime76.livejournal.com
ah... Jae already have feelings for Yunho. Seems like Yunho is kind towards his subjects and only cruel to those that deceive him. If yes, i hope he is getting over this hurt pride & start seeing the real Jae.

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Date: 2009-04-11 05:58 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hana-cho.livejournal.com
yeah you are right Yunho doesn't like it to get cheated on. Isn't it sweet how Jae feel for the man who hurt him all the time?

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Date: 2009-04-11 06:23 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] venisu.livejournal.com

I AM SO SORRY BUT AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


so sweeeet~
i wanna see more yunjae action :D:D:D:D
aha..
thank you kyung for the light chuckle from yunho xD

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Date: 2009-04-11 06:27 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hana-cho.livejournal.com
omg *LOL*

you will see some in the next chapter ^^

Hankyung is nevertheless good for something, ne?

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Date: 2009-04-11 11:19 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dans711.livejournal.com
coooooooooool an update!! <3
yaaaayyy could yunho start to fall for jae?
who knows *___*

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Date: 2009-04-11 11:23 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hana-cho.livejournal.com
well maybe. You will see it soon ^^

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Date: 2009-04-14 04:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jaejoongmylove.livejournal.com
Sorry for reading and commenting so late!!! _/-\o I had a lot of work to do.... ;__;

Oh yunho's finally nice to Jaejoong or at least it looks like he is
“My Lord, I'm sorry. I thought you were someone else.” Jaejoong answered slowly.
“I see, I see. Come on you won't want to miss my party.” Yunho said and turned around, while he offered one arm for the younger man. Jaejoong stood up and went to the Lord. He took the offer and let Yunho lead him out of the room. It was a rare opportunity that he offered him something and Jaejoong was really glad that today was a special day.

That was so cute and sweet... ^__^

Can't wait for the next chapter^^
*hug*
<3

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Date: 2009-04-14 05:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hana-cho.livejournal.com
ah is okay I forget to write comments too

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Date: 2009-04-14 11:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sidmaron.livejournal.com
OOOOOOOOH! *3*
Jae is being escorted by Yunho! Hehe~
Can't await what's going to happen afterwards! :P



I've got my ARENA April '09 today, plus Tri-Angle and Heart, Mind and Soul! <333
Now I only need Five in the black and Rising Sun Live! :D But I think u know I wanna buy those in Korea! *jumps*

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Date: 2009-04-15 08:49 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hana-cho.livejournal.com
I can see the flowers ^^ yeah ^^

well btw I tagged you ^^

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Date: 2009-04-15 01:32 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] moon1084.livejournal.com
ok so i thought i had left a comment and u stated i didnt so i am back here to leave a comment and wooah wats with yunho's nice attitude? i hope to see more of it! aww jaejoongie u poor naive little thing! su is such a pervert here lol! update soon

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Date: 2009-04-15 08:53 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hana-cho.livejournal.com
lol why is Su a pervert?

well I'm writing on something ^^

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Date: 2009-06-11 06:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] spirit-jae.livejournal.com
i'm hoping that soon we can see Jae in pleasure with yunho.

please update soon I <3 this fic!

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Date: 2009-06-18 10:33 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jeaismylove.livejournal.com
I can't wait to read the next part this story is getting good.

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Date: 2009-08-10 05:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] galgal79.livejournal.com
Please tell me this is not the ending. I can't wait for Yunho to fall deeply with Jae. So sweet!!! When will be the next update?

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Date: 2009-08-11 08:50 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hana-cho.livejournal.com
this isn't the end

and I hope I will update it soon

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Date: 2009-09-18 07:18 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jheana.livejournal.com
Awww! Yunho is starting to treat Jaejoong better! Hope to see more of their sweetness soon!



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Date: 2009-09-18 07:20 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hana-cho.livejournal.com
the next chapter is already on ^^

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Date: 2009-09-29 07:06 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cool-mint-ka.livejournal.com
ah jae is seeing another side of yunho....hope jae can give yunho a nice bday present ^^

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Date: 2009-10-27 07:43 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] beanbun.livejournal.com
aww~ i hope yunnie is slowly changing for jae~
jae ! please stay by yunnie's side!
he need you^ ^ hehe

in german^^

Date: 2009-11-02 08:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] myloveisnotalie.livejournal.com
Haiz ich hab nicht genug wörter um es in englisch zu schreiben -__-
Ich hasse es sehr, wie konnte Jae und Su mama denn ihrer söhne einfachso jemanden überlassen?

Jae ist in diesem fic wirklich schwach, wir sind im chap 13 und die gefühle zwischen YunJae ist nicht wirklich entwickelt.


anyway, thank you very much for you fanfic^^

Re: in german^^

Date: 2009-11-02 08:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hana-cho.livejournal.com
kein Problem ^^

*lol* Jetzt kann ich auch mal in Deutsch antworten ^^

Nya Jaes Gefühle werden schon deutlich Yunho läst sich nur ein bisschen Zeit.

Jae scheint schwach zu sein, aber nur weil er Yunhos Welt nicht kennt.

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Date: 2009-11-05 12:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] yuki-3.livejournal.com

Did The ice start to melt ?! Awwwww .. I can see a bright future T^T

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Date: 2009-12-26 02:29 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] devilnh.livejournal.com
ahhh...at last.. yunjae is alive!! yaay....

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Date: 2010-02-11 11:25 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] awshin.livejournal.com
I wonder if tonight would be the turning point for yunjae? Happy for yoosu btw. =D Thanks for writing this!

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Date: 2010-06-28 12:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] skyp3.livejournal.com
oh...jae falls in love with yh...and now yh is so nice to him..hope everything is alright
Thank you
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